"Wow"! Was all I could hear from the living room as I was brushing my teeth. After I had done so, I ran to the front as fast as I could. To my amazement, I had saw the amazing opening of the Olympics. Since my family does not have sky we were watching it on Prime television. I sat down and got comfortable, getting ready for the rest of the opening.
After the commercial the Olympic rings attached together. It was so amazing and very complicated. I was trying to get it through my mind how on earth they could have pulled that off. But they did and it was awesome. The sparks of the rings actually felt like I was there. To be honest the only word running through my mind was WOW!
The only word I could explain for the whole opening ceremony was "Astonishing". I seriously can't wait for the game to commence.
Makerita big WOW to you too! I'm impressed with your descriptive account of the opening ceremony and that you got it published at the speed of a professional reporter. I hope you enjoy the rest of the Olympic Games!
ReplyDeleteGreat job Rita! As Mrs T-J says, you have impressed the world by writing as a 'real' reporter and not waiting till someone at school told you that you HAD to write about it. Keep this up over the next month and your followers will increase every day :)
ReplyDeleteMrs Burt
Well done Makerita! I am impressed with the way you have captured your thoughts while they are still fresh in your mind. Thank you for sharing.
ReplyDeleteMrs Lagitupu
I thought your post was really cool and it had a lot of describing words. The word I liked the most was astonishing.
ReplyDeleteHi i like the words you used, and you use speech marks really well. Your story was interesting.
ReplyDeleteWOW i really liked that story especially the title it catches your attention and I liked how you used the title word, astonishing, in your story.
ReplyDeleteHello my name is Lucas and I'm from Te Akau Ki Papamoa School. I really liked your story. Especially the part where the only words going through your mind was "WOW!" and "Astonishing!" Also the title which made me want to read on. Great work Makerita :).
ReplyDeleteHi I am Charlie I really like your good words. And I really like your title It really made want to read your story.
ReplyDeleteNice Work Makerita,you did very well.I like how you described the moment so that if I haven't watched it if I read your story I would have watched it in my head.
ReplyDeleteWell done, Makerita
WOW! Awesome stuff, i got hooked in when i read the title. Nice!!! :)
ReplyDeleteHi Makerita
ReplyDeleteI liked the way you used the word in your tittle "ASTONISHING"!! and once again well done
Hi My Name is Kobe You write an amazing story about the olympics i loved the bit when james bond and the queen jumped out of the plane and I loved the word (ASTONISHING)
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